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Star War: Ep.4-Ch.1

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A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...there was a girl who decided to write a Star Wars Fan-Fic and ended up making her own version becasue of copyright issues.....

So, our story begins aboard a rebel ship trying to get away from the evil Dark Raider. Who's supreme powers like the FORCE make him an unstopable being. However, on this very day, a small team of rebels is joining to try and stop Raiders plans.

Along on the ship is Princess Leah and her droid BFFs, CP3-0 and D2-R2. There are a bunch of others, but they aren't of real importance in this story. So anyways, Leah was the princess of the planet....um.....hang on. (Flips though script.) Uh....lets just call it Eearith. -derp- She has lushious brown hair that she prefers scrunched up in weird ponytails and wears what looks like a sea-green toga/dress. CP3-0 is a paranoid gold robot girl who worries about every little thing. D2-R2 is a smaller robot but blue and silver. Yeah, everyone knows what the original looks like in the actual movie so....moving on.

Now the flight of the AAPD (Amazingly Awesome Planet Destroyer) has captured the small Rebel Team and was about to board. While Leah and the robots tried to find an escape, the rest of the fleet prepared for battle...

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CP3-0 looked around the room franticly, mummbling to herself. "Did you hear that?" she jumped and looked up. "We got hit in the main engines! They're going to kill us all!"

D2-R2 turned her head to her with a blank expression. "Dude, calm down. We just need to find the escape pods." she beeped.

Suddenly, the ship rocks back and forth rapidly, knocking them down. One of the AAPD's ships locks onto the rebel ship, casuing servere damage to the hull. Princess Leah races down the coridor to the droids.

"D2! CP! You must hurry and get out of here!" she cries. She stops to help them back up. The ship rocks again. The rebel forces race down the halls with their weapons and ready there selves for boarding. They know what their mission is. Stall the Dark Lord long enough for the princess to escape. That's it. They're ready. Guns aimed. The target in sight. Praying to their God.  

Suddenly the doors exploded open. In a cloud of smoke and smoldering metal, a small group of Stormtoopers emerged through the mist. The rebels fire at once, and the troopers take no chances. They fire blindly at one another. Both sides look for cover, but the empty hallway makes it hard. However, soon the troopers, with more training and experience, seize the enemy, and the rebels who are left retreat in hopes of escape. It is only cruel irony that the dead ones are the ones who find escape now.

Meanwhile the Princess pulls D2-R2 aside and gives her something. "Take this to Obi-Wan Knobles. He'll know what to do."  The droid nodded and went to join up with CP3-0. Princess Leah checked the hall and slipped away down towards the back of the ship to grab some personal belongings.

"There you are! Where were you?" CP scowled. D2-R2 only rolled into the escape pod and said nothing. CP3-0 rambled on for a while about staying together and obeying orders.

The fierce battle was over. The troopers then lined up in formation as their leader approached, cuing the evil villain music in the background. Dark Raider walks on the ship so quickly and swiftly, he seems to glide. A trooper brings forth a rebel who works the ship. The man begins to tremble with fear so bad that he loses his stregth to fight back. The Dark Lord towers over him, his mask a symbol of death, yet with an expressionless visage. No one has ever seen the true face behind the mask, but there are rumors that it's so horrid and evil it could make a grown man fall to his knees and cry like a child. In other words, worse than the face of the emperor.

"Have you found the princess?" Dark Raider  asked coldly.

"We're still looking my lord." the trooper replied, "But none of the escape pad have launched yet, so she's still aboard."

"And the plans for the Amazingly Awesome Planet Destroyer?"

"They're not in the ship's main computer, sir."

The Dark Lord turned on the soldier. He could not turn away from his eyes, and began to feel faith. Dark Raider grabbed his throat and began to choke him. "Where are those plans?" He thundered.

"I…I d-don't know…w-what your talking…about…" Even though he was being killed by the dark lord himself, the soldier would rather he take his life is place of an entire civilization. He had to do what he had to do.

"Lies!" Raider roared, grasping harder. The soldiers tried to break free, but he was too strong and powerful. Why did he struggle? No ones sure. It was it only last hope I suppose, though totally pointless.

"P-please!" he cried hoarsly, "Were just a counseling ship returning to Eearith! W-w-we didn't steal any plans!" As he spoke, the breath was becoming thin. Raider showed no mercy.

"If this is  counseling ship, then where's the ambasitor?!" But it was too late. The soldiers arms fell to his sides, eyes close. He was dead.

Dark Raider threw the lifeless body at the wall and it fell to the ground like a rag doll. "Find those plans and the princess immediately!" Raider shouted to the troopers. "I want her ALIVE!"  

In the back of the ship, three troopers were searching the corridor for any escaped prisoners. Princess Leah laided in the shadows, waiting for the right moment to strike. Unfoutuantly one of them saw her, and she was only able to shoot one trooper before they had her.

It didn't matter though, the plans were safe, and she wasn't going to breath a word to Dark Raider. He'd kill her before she confessed anything. In the meantime, Cp3-0  and D2-R2 were on their way to a dessert planet where their real mission was about to begin….


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"Oh, great! Just great! Where are we now?" CP3-0  complained. They had crash landed on a distant planet. Nothing but sand and rocks were visible and that meant no hope of help or rescue.  This angered the droid  very much, for she had sand all up in her gears and it made her uncomfortable. Not too mention that the intense  heat was overloading her circuits, making her even more irritable.  

"Oh quit your wining and help me locate my old master." Artoo scowled. She was determinted to find Obi Wan and give him the information he needed. She began to roll east.

"What are you talking about?" CP asked, "GAH! Just will you please help me figure out where we are?!"

"No, I have a secret mission to complete!" she shouted back, showing no signs of stopping. This did not help CP3-0 calm down in any way. She stormed over and began to argue with the little droid, but it was no good. She had her computerized heart set on her mission and was not going to let CP3-0 or anyone else get in her way.

Finally, after 10 minutes of bickering, CP3-0 gave up too, and decided to go her own way. She wasn't in the mood for argument and didn't have much patents left either. So the two droids went their separate ways, unaware that they soon would both meet again by a cruel twist of faith.

(To be continued…)
SO here's the beginning to the story. Since the movie is really long, I wanna make sure the beginning is simple and sweet. No my best work but I'm here to practice.

About the Picture: This is my own version of the story so I changed the character design a little. Princess Leah's dress is green and I kinda remodeled the design for Dark Raider too, so I don't have to work too hard on the pictures.

BTW, my Stormtroopers are ugly, I know. XD

***I DO NOT OWN STAR WARS!****

Please leave a comment if you enjoyed, and I'm open to any advice on the plot, story line and character dialog. :)
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